Monday, 30 November 2009
Filming again
Today we are planning on filming the scenes in school with our boy character and hopefully getting them all done so then we only have to film the rest of the graveyard scenes with our boy character and can get on with editing and finishing our short film after this week.
Considering how many problems we have had i think that our short film is coming along quite well as long as we can get the filming finished this week.
Wednesday, 25 November 2009
Filming has finally started
We have made some changes in our film, one of the changes is our main character, as we were let down many times by two different people we have just decided that it will be better if one of us was the main character and I have said that i will be her, the only problem with this is that i will not be able to film the scenes that i am acting in so i am going to film all the other scenes that i can and help laura set up the shots and give ideas to how they will be filmed. Also because I am now going to be the main character in our film we could use some of the practise shots of me in the school in our film if we need them.
Today we actually got some filming done, although we couldn't get our boy character available to film today we got most of the graveyard shots done and we got a few more shots than we may actually need but i think this is a good idea because then we will not need to go back to film any more and will have more shots to include when editing if we find we do actually need them.
Tuesday, 24 November 2009
Filming hazards
Graveyard scenes:
- One of us may trip over or slip on the ground, Likelihood: Medium
- Filming may offend or upset some people visiting the graveyard, Likelihood: medium/high
- Empty holes or uneven graves on the ground may trip us, Likelihood: Medium
School scenes:
- if we film at the end of school clening will be being done so floor may be wet and one of us may slip or fall, Likelihood: Low
- doors or gates may get locked and we may not be able to get out if we do not ask permissions to film, Likelihood: Low
- People in school may make filming difficult, Likelihood: medium/high
Home scenes:
- At home you are generally off guard so may not be expecting anything to go wrong so if it does it will be a shock, Likelihood: medium
- Knives in the kitchen, Likelihood: Medium
- slipping in the bathroom scenes, Likelihood: Low/ medium
Bus scenes:
- Some members of the public may not cooperate and make filming difficult or even get offended that we are filming, Likelihood: medium/high
- Their is a hazard that the bus may crash as we are filming, Likelihood: Low/medium
Now we know about these hazards we will have to be careful as we are filming and make sure we do our best to avoid these dangers.
Film poster

This is the picture i will use for the film poster. I am not sure what our film is going to be called for sure yet, i will just make a mock up of the poster for now untill we have a definate name for our film, i will then re-make the poster with our chosen name on it.
I have chosen this picture as i feel it represents our film quite well, the main plot of our film includes the setting of the graveyard, and this is where the twist in our film happens so it may be quite an iconic scene in our film which the audience will recognise, I also think that a picture of a graveyard is quite interesting because it will trigger different feelings for different people and some may be able to relate to this picture in some way.
Let down again
I am therefore going to make a start on the other element of our short film task, the task i am going to make a start on is the film poster, although we were going to use a still from our film this is now not possible as we haven't been able to film yet, I am now going to use a picture of the graveyard we took last week for our ideas of settings.
Amy x
Sunday, 22 November 2009
finally going to start filming!
i have managed to get in contact with a boy who is willing to be in our film and so have communicated with our girl as well and been able to sort out a filming schedule which shall begin as of tomorrow
Monday 8.45-10.20 filming with Lauren and Jack
all of graveyard scenes- beginning and end of film
Tuesday 12.30-3.10 filming with Lauren
all footage of house in the morning
Wednesday 3.10-5.30 filming with Lauren
all footage of house in the evening
then leaving Thursday to begin editing
i shall then make up a schedule for next week in which we can get all of remaining shots finished.
Friday, 20 November 2009
Shots and ways of filming
With the scenes including the school we should film the building as though it is towering above our character to give it a daunting look, because our character is not going to see the school as a good place because she has no friends.
I thought that because our main character is feeling lonely we should film with a slight angle to show that she is not happy, we will do this by having the camera looking down on her and making her seem insignificant. This angle on her could then change to looking straight on at her towards the end when she meets the boy, this will show things are looking up for her.In the graveyard scene as she is walking towards the grave i felt that we could make this scene quite interesting by filming her at all different angles and when we come to editing it we could cut it so that she is walking then it jumps forward a bit then carries on walking and show it from a different angle, we could even pan around her as she is walking and show her walking past and then seeing her walk from the back and finally getting to the grave.
When our character is stood at the grave we could film as though the grave is a character, we could do a match-on-action shot so the camera looks at her from the grave and is looking at her then a shot from where she is stood and looking at the grave, I think this will be effective because it will show the connection between her and the grave.
On the bus scene we will have to film more footage of our character on the bus because then if we need to show a long time we can use the footage we already have rather than having to film more, also this footage may come in handy in case we need more and we dont have time to film or have more problems like we already have.Wednesday, 18 November 2009
Problems with filming again
Apart from this we have planned which shots we need to film at one time and when we are now thinking of filming them so even though this let down has not been a help we are going to find a way around it.
Film review and poster
As we originally decided we are going to do a film review about our short film to give the audience a better idea of our film and make them want to see it, however, we have changed our second idea from doing an interview about our film on radio to a film poster for our film, we feel that we could do this better because last year we both used photoshop to make a magazine and could again use these skills on photoshop to create a film poster using a still from our film to make our target audience want to come and watch our film.
Tuesday, 17 November 2009
Additions to Storyboard
- Graveyard shot- More close-ups
- Slower getting out of bed after alarm sounds in shots 11 + 12
- More shots of pictures of dad around her room
- After bedroom scene we need shots of her walking to the bathroom rather than just appearing there
- Close ups of post it notes
- In bathroom cupboard show 3 toothbrushes or a razor to show elements of her dads existence
- More hints of dad being dead e.g. pictures missing from the wall as she walks to kitchen
- Use a cracked mirror to show she is sad
- Quick paced shots of her getting cereal, bowl and spoon for breakfast
- Close ups of post its on fridge
- shot of girl sighing in shot 22 when she sees the milk is empty
- girl leaves bowl empty as she walks out the house to school
- before shot 28 show her waiting for the bus and not it just appearing, shots from behind and front and showing a dull day
- close ups of hands opening purse to get money and see a picture of her and dad then she shuts the purse.
- shot of her getting off the bus and walking into school
- hear the school bell and see her walking into her class
- after her class finishes bell rings again and show fast paced shots of her clearing away
- After boy walks past in shot 34 show them looking at eachother from far away as well as close ups
- in classroom close up of what she is reading and hear her reading
- on whiteboard behing teacher have written what she is feeling
- close up shots of her clearing things before knocking pen on the floor in shot 39
- after pen shot and them accidental touching close up of his eyes and then hers
- Instead of her just appearing at her house show a shot of the bus driving past her house and front of her house
- in her room a close up of her face up against the window like the shot of her on the bus
- close up of her hand knocking the photo off the side
- before she takes the photo out of the frame show the broken glass
- dont show her dad is dead on the calendar just put something like "dad 2pm"
- follow hands around and placing photo on pillow, camera stays stationary on photo on pillow as she gets up
- we need to show it is another day instead of her just appearing at school again e.g. getting into bed shutting curtains etc...
- shot of trees/house in the morning then her getting breakfast again, close up of post it on table showing her mum has left her again
- quick shots of bowl in sink, grabbing bag, shutting door
- pan of front of school in the morning
- before bell rings show close up of her at her desk looking distant
- shot of bell ringing and her picking up all her books and leaving for the door
- when buying the coffee in shot 62, have the camera coming up towards her (like the first shot in graveyard) then turns her head and boy is stood there and offers to pay for coffee
- change the note on her hand as she holds her hand out to not make it too obvious that her dad is dead and just write something like "dad 2pm"
- shots of empty school before she leaves and show her leaving through the gates
- shots of road, trees, cars with music
- shot of her walking to graveyard
- camera infront as she is walking towards the grave then switches to it following her and then switches again to the camera looking at her from where the grave is and she walks towards it and looks down.
Filming
Thursday, 12 November 2009
bus shot

went to town the other day on the bus and so took a photo of the kind of shot we are looking for in our bus scene of the film. our protagonist will be leaning on the window looking at at what passes by :)
Tuesday, 10 November 2009
storyboard
hope you like it!
laura and amy x x
Filming
He also doesn't mind who he is in the film with which is a plus, unlike our previous main character who wanted to choose who she worked with which wasn't practical for us.
Solutions
Memento
In the film the main character has a memory problem following an accident, so to get the audience to see the story through his eyes the film starts at the end and as the film progresses time goes backwards and starts to show how he got to that point at the end, this is done by showing an end scene then showing the scene before that and so on, i think this is effective because just as the main character doesn't know how he got to that point neither do we, this will also keep the audience watching because they want to find out what has happened and what is going to happen.
This film will help us in our practical because we are also going to mess around with time slightly, although it wont be throughout our film it is what will create an interesting ending and keep our audience watching, also in the film it uses black and white to show a change in time and we may try this out in our film to see if this is effective.
Problems
let down....
speak to you soon
laura x x
Tuesday, 3 November 2009
Re-presentation
- the decision over what is chosen to be represented and what is rejected.
- the choices made when organising the represetation.
- the options taken to focus the audience in a certain way
Gatekeeping
a theorist called White (1961) spoke of the 'gatekeepers' - that is the people who are part of the decision making process in the construction of media texts.
in this case, WE (me and Amy) are the gatekeepers, as we are the ones making the decisions for our film, however in a bigger scale, the gatekeepers of us are our chosen institution who in effect make decisions also on what they wish our film to show.
Richard dyer - The matter of Images
when showing the representation of our lonely and sad protagonist in the film, will then be inflicted on the audience. they will see this representation and then go on to treat others that fit our representation, the way they see them treated in our text.
filming
this means we can finally crack on with starting the filming
we have managed to arrange some days in which we can all go an do some camera work and also available locations, such as the house - kitchen and bedroom, graveyard and school.
we shall have the storyboard up on the blog very soon!
post modern media
we no longer have any sense of the difference between real tings and images of them, or real experiences and simulations of them.
media reality is the new reality.
in the modern period, artists experimented with the representation of reality.
in the post modern period, the idea of representation gets 'remixed', played around through pastiche, parody and inter textual references where the people that make the texts deliberately expose there nature as constructed texts and make no attempt to pretend they are realists.
value judgements are blurred. everything is down to taste. anything can be art, deserve an audience and culture 'eats itself'. there is no longer anything new to produce or distribute.
the distinction between ,media and reality has collapsed, and we now live in a 'reality' defined by image and representations.
images refer to each other and represent each other as reality rather than some 'pure' reality that exists before the image represents it.
Die Driet Welle


in mr smith's lesson we learnt about the Third Wave collective Identitywe were given class rules:
1. sit one seat apart
2. must stand up to ask or answer questions
3. stand up whenever a member of staff enters the room
4. answer or ask a question in 3 words
5. before speaking you must always say 'Mr Smith'
we were told that from now on we were no longer unique, we were all the same and there was to be no individuality within the class.
Areas of colective identity
gender
sexuality
religion
nationality
age
class
ethnicity
disability
celebrity
a collective identity is a group of entities that share or are motivated by at least one common issue or interest, or work together on a specific project to achieve a common objective.
after doing this lesson, we then found out that Mr Smith had simply done an experiment on us and had not really gone crazy in thinking the class had to be one. he had done a much more simper version of an experiment held in America.
The Third Wave was an experiment to demonstrate the appeal of fascism undertaken by history teacher Ron Jones with sophomore high school students attending his Contemporary History class as part of a study of Nazi Germany.The experiment took place at Cubberley High School in Palo Alto, California, during the first week of April 1967.
Jones, unable to explain to his students how the German populace could claim ignorance of the extermination of the Jewish people, decided to show them instead. Jones started a movement called "The Third Wave" and convinced his students that the movement is to eliminate democracy. The fact that democracy emphasizes individuality was considered as a drawback of democracy, and Jones emphasized this main point of the movement in its motto: "Strength through discipline, strength through community, strength through action, strength through pride".
The experiment took on a life of its own, with students from all over the school joining in: on the third day the class expanded from initial 30 students to 43 attendees. All of the students showed drastic improvement in their academic skills and tremendous motivation. All of the students were issued a member card and each of them received a special assignment (like designing a Third Wave Banner, stopping non-members from entering the class, etc). Jones instructed the students on how to initiate new members, and by the end of the day the movement had over 200 participants. Jones was surprised that some of the students started reporting to him when other members of the movement failed to abide by the rules.
On Thursday, the fourth day of the experiment, Jones decided to terminate the movement because it was slipping out of his control. The students became increasingly involved in the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was astounding. He announced to the participants that this movement is only a part of a nationwide movement and that on the next day a presidential candidate of the movement would publicly announce existence of the movement. Jones ordered students to attend a noon rally on Friday to witness the announcement.
it was quite scary to think how easy it had been for Mr Smith to change the class in the space of just one lesson the way he did and to make us follow the rules. and just like the kids in America, could we have become a group of crazed facists by the end of the week?
we then watched a film that had been created on the basis of the experiment.




at the moment i dont really see what collective identity is going to be in our film, as we only focus on individuals.
